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Jul 09, 08 - 10:50 AM |
| i dont kno wuts goin on...
i thought i was right but i thought wrong...
ive always been a good person...
but i guess my feeling change like seasons...
it jus like the start cuz its a lil cold...
then something springs out thats hard to hold...
the temperature rises and stands tall...
but eventually thats wen everything falls...
and your back to the start with a broken heart...
its the same cycle that occurs constantly...
i jus wished someone could change it instantly...
im
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| Sunny says... |
Jul 10, 08 - 1:01 AM |
| Wow..is this a poem?
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| DatOneDooDe says... |
Jul 10, 08 - 6:55 PM |
| yah it is
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| bei says... |
Jul 11, 08 - 8:50 PM |
| ...u wrote this?
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| DatOneDooDe says... |
Jul 14, 08 - 4:23 PM |
| yah i wrote it
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| xXlonestarXx says... |
Jul 21, 08 - 2:48 AM |
| That was a good one Dat!
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| Mrniceguymanboykid says... |
Jul 26, 08 - 3:05 PM |
| I know what went wrong, you were good in bed, but only at sleeping. That's why you now have a broken heart, yep.
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| vietgumbie says... |
Jul 31, 08 - 5:51 PM |
| i hate my gf..dat y when she sleep..i just fuck her and cum on her face and left every time when i get off work and head to her house while her window was cracking and i climb in and left with all my cum on her face...bitch ass!!!!
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| PUNKrockinKiMMi says... |
Feb 04, 09 - 12:16 AM |
| i like what you wrote. i write poems myself. and poems/music/lyrics are a few of the best ways to express urself. time heals all wounds. ! i have a very uplifting quote somewhere.. that my friend commented on me when I went through a very very bad break up. but I can't find it right now. sorry im no help LOL
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| Durrbaby says... |
Feb 20, 09 - 11:35 AM |
| that was nice what you wrote. well things fall apart for things to be better. it's to make you stronger. you must let things get worse to get better because if you dnt let it get worse it'll never get better.
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| Sir-X-Alot says... |
Mar 02, 09 - 6:23 PM |
| Sunny....you're pretty ; )~
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